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    Post by Cthugha Mon Feb 16, 2015 2:20 pm

    Vex the Metang(any) 250px-375Metang

    Name: Vex

    Text color: #B7B7CE

    Item: None

    Gender: Genderless

    Age: Adolescent (15)

    Species: #200, Steel/Psychic, The iron claw Pokémon, Metang

    Height: 3'11"

    Weight: 446.4 lbs.

    Pokedex Entry: (alpha sapphire)
    When two Beldum fuse together, Metang is formed. The brains of the Beldum are joined by a magnetic nervous system. This Pokémon turns its arms to the rear for traveling at high speed.  

    Level: 30

    Ability: Clear Body

    Nature: Brave(+Attack/-Speed)

    Characteristic: Quick Tempered

    Moves:
    Metal Claw - Level up
             
     Take Down - Level up
               
    Zen Headbutt  - Level up
             
     Confusion - Level up

    History: Vex had a normal life, no, a normal childhood. He had a mom, a dad and an older brother. Everything was as normal as could be, but, when Vex was 14 "It" came. His family thought it as only a sick Pokémon traveling alone, but they were greatly mistaken. This being of cannibalism and evil changed that normal life forever. His father and older brother engaged the flesh hankering Nidoking that stumbled towards them. Vex's mother guarded him from any danger that may come after them. As his kin tried to fight it off, they would know no victory. First his brother. Then his father. Ripped apart like fruit in a piece meat thrown in front of a starving dog.
    This Horrific sight would scar Vex for life. Vex felt the rage and fear grow inside of him, he would not walk away unless this monster was no more. But Vex's mother would not let him fight. She ordered him to run away as far as he could and not to look back. He was troubled, he wanted to avenge his fallen kin, but they could never put a scratch on the monster so how would he? Vex did not want to run, he wanted to be brave like his father and older brother. But he couldn't. The look in his mothers eyes forced him to do what she said. So he ran as fast as he could the opposite direction of the monster. As Vex ran he could hear the shrieks of pain coming form his mother. He did as he was told, never look back.

    Appearance: He looks like a regular Metang, except with eyes that look like there is no inner light or hope left.

    Personality: Vex is naturally a loner more or less. It is difficult for him to make friends because of his quick temper and, when he's angry, his pugnacious attitude.


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    Post by Cthugha Mon Feb 16, 2015 3:19 pm

    I am ready for this character to be moved to the main PC
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    Post by Victini Sat Feb 21, 2015 4:02 am

    Metang does not learn Zen Headbutt until level 32 - he should not naturally know this move at level 30.

    I'd say his level is too high for his young age and the fact that he didn't have a Trainer background - either make him older or decrease the level. I'd cap a teenage, wild Pokemon at level 20 at most.

    I'd like to see his history and personality expanded upon. I know next to nothing about his life before the epidemic and his personality needs to be more than two sentences long for me to get a good feel of the character.

    Please revise and I'll take another look for approval.


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    Post by Cthugha Sat Feb 21, 2015 8:36 am

    Thanks for the advice will do
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    Post by Victini Sat Feb 28, 2015 3:03 pm

    Since there has been no progress here for a week, I'm moving this back to WIP.


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