Forrik the Infected Charizard (died in rp)

Forrik the infected Charizard

Level
45

Gender
Male

Age
Adult

Nature
Brave

Characteristics
Somewhat Vain

Ability
Blaze

Moves
Slash Level up
Flamethrower TM move
Fire Fang Level up
Smoke Screen Level up

Height
5'07"

Weight
197 lb.

National Dex Number
#006 Charizard/The Flame Pokemon

Pokedex Entry
It is said that Charizard's fire burns hotter if it has experienced harsh battles. W2

Appearance
He was attacked by the infected and became infected himself. Missing an eye lid from his right eye, therefore he can't close it.

History
Forrik was a starter for a female trainer by the name of Liz. Though he had been with her for 25 years and fought as many battles. One day Liz and Forrik challenged a trainer from Shinnoh which turned out to be a scientist studying the charmander evolution line. The scientist thanked Liz for the challenge and research he got from studying the battle. 25 years later Forrik became a mighty charizard. Then, on a rainy day Liz had to decide whether to keep Forrik or to let him go. It was then she decided to let him go. Forrik wanted to stay with her but she couldn't train him anymore.

He started a family a year later with another charizard a month later he had three newly born charmanders he lived happily with them for 4 years.

One day after gathering food to feed his family he returned to his nest to find his family dead the children were half eaten and their bodies hardly recognizable. For about a year and a half Forrik had tried to survive. Then one day, he got reckless and was ambushed be the infected. They attacked him relentlessly. One got him on his right side of his face. He pulled it off his face tearing the scales off his right eye. He became infected with the virus.


Now infected and losing his life slowly. However, he seeks revenge on the undead, though he is somewhat emotionally unstable because of his past experience with the loss of his family.  His ultimate goal is to avenge his family's death

Time of infection
2 weeks ago

Notes

-Seeks revenge upon the undead
-His right eye is constantly open but is able to rest with it open.
-Has a strong hate towards the undead and won't hesitate to attack them.
-Kind hearted, but doesn't talk about his past.
-unstable emotionally and sometimes gets angry easily

requesting image reduction and clear up plz.

Such things are requested for at the Requests/Commissions section of the market street thread.

thanks for the info Ho-oh :)

move to computer profile plz

A few notes:
You have to be on the site for a few months to have a floater but you can still be in Blackthorne.
If he's an infected not an undead then he wouldn't have much signs of the infection yet though it'll get worse quickly due to his typing.
There are pretty strict rules about reading, if he's learnt how to read he'd have to have some human instruction and even then he'd be unable to read very much.

okay then I'll leave him as a WIP until then and I'll get some of this fixed up

I would like to place Forrik into the main computer base plz

...Violet City doesn't exist as a team. You can't create it, as you're too new, and Johto is closed to team creation. The image needs to be centered. Also you need to clean up your formatting for most of your code. Moves need to state how they were learned.

It's also been stated multiple times by mewtwo in the past that in order for a pokemon to read, it would have to have a good reason for it. What reason did the trainer have for teaching this Charizard to read? What benefit does being able to read offer as a character, other than "Look what I can do"?

Other than those points, grammar needs cleaning up, as you're mixing tenses a bit. "He rushes to defend them, but he was to late." Rushes is present, while the sentance is in the past tense.

Moved back into WIP until this is ready for approval.

I see what ya mean Mew I somehow have that problem where I mix the tenses up I'll finish cleaning this up asap

Alrighty Mew let me know if ya spot any other errors.

You never justified why he needs to be able to read.

The moves list still isn't updated with how the moves were learned. As an example of this, from my profile:
Moves:
Psychic- Level Up
Metronome- Level Up
Transform- Starter Move
Aura Sphere- Level Up

It feels that the image is a bit on the small side maybe it's just me though lol

Kaze edited a larger one for you over here. c:

I don't want to seem like a killjoy, but I'm just checking. Are Harbringers even allowed to be used in backstories? Even if not stated who or what Harbringer?

To have a Floater you must be active on the site for over two months with more RP experience in our forums. You only have one character and he hasn't been active for over two months. I suggest creating and RPing a few more characters before trying to make a Floater.

Scratch is listed several times in History but he does not have the move.

Harbingers are not allowed in History unless express permission from the Admins and the Harbinger chosen are given. Especially if they caused his infection since they are no longer contagious. He would have had to have been infected in the beginning of the outbreak for them to infect him and if that were the case he would be dead. Not Undead. Just dead. It will not be allowed.

Human language (speaking or otherwise) if I will allow it at all must be very poor as Charizard are not known for high intelligence. I would not allow speaking further than maybe a five year old.

Reading will not be allowed for this character because the reason is not justifiable for it. Same reasons apply as above.

Please revise.

I'll get this fixed ASAP.

Fixed.

Approved.

Can I place Forrik in the Olvine team

If you want that team it must be in your title. Otherwise a Mod will pick a team for you.

This has been in PC for a long despite being approved. Please move this character to Living and into it's team. Thank you.

I'm sorry Mewtwo, I must have passed over it by mistake last time profiles were done x:
It's een moved to living dead, and added to the olivine team.

I'd like to place forrik back on to the main computer please.

I did finish your art request by the way~

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